Reading and Writing: 高年級寫作

I used the time machine to go to 1949.  I saw many people.  Some people (were) from China.  The China people was (were) very bad.  Because they saw who and they kill who. (They killed whoever they saw.)  So the Taiwan had many people died. (So in Taiwan, many people died.)  And I went back the time machine.

Tony wanted to have one time machine, so Tony could go to any years Tony wanted to.  First Tony went to see dinosaur.  After that, he saw many cowboys riding horses.  I want to have time machine too, and I want to go to the year 1879, because we have electric light to use.

I bought a time machine, because I wanted to know my future.  I turned the key to my brand-new time machine.  I wanted to go to 2030.  I saw my honey, he was very handsome.  Then I went to the year 2035.  I saw my daughter.  She was very cute.  She looked like me.  When I say my honey and my daughter, I felt very happy.

I turned on the brand-new time machine.  First I went to Japan.  In Japan, I saw lots of people on foot.  And they didn’t smoke.  the smell was so good.  And I bought lots of food.  I went back the time machine.  And went to Africa.  In Africa lon time ago, they didn’t have lots of food.  But by then they has (have) many food.  the felt very happy.  And I went to 3000, the earth was all ocean.

It was Shelly’s first time to use her time machine.  She was very happy, but she didn’t know how to use it, so Shelly press (pressed) the wrong button.  She went to Mars and saw many ET ( ETs).  She is (was) very excited.  She play (played) all day.  Many ETs was (were)  her friend (friends).  She got married.  Her husband’s name is (was) PPMM.  One day she saw PPMM kiss (kissed) Amy.  She was angry and sad.  So she went back to 1945 in Japan.  She saw the tombomb explore.  One of her eyes dropped and her baby had three eyes, one hand and eight legs.

If I have a time machine, I want to know my furture.  Because if I know my future I will be very happy.  Because if I can be a teacher and I will read many many books.  If I know my future can be an idol I will be very happy.

I bought my time machine to go to 2007.  Because I wanted to see my father.  I miss my father very much.  I wanted to stop that accident.  But I didn’t want to see my father die again.  And I wanted to 2035.  Because I wanted to see my honey.  My honey was tall or short?  Fat or thin?  Handsome or ugly?  And I wanted to see my daughter.  I wanted to know if my daughter is cute or pretty.

Japan has Shichi-Go-San Festival.  Shichi is for seven-year-old girls; Go is for five-year-old boys; San is for three-year-old boys and girls.  Japanese girls wear kimonos and obis.  Japanese boys wear kimonos, obis and hakamas.  November 15th is Japanese Children’s Day.  They go to temples, wash hands, they put donation and pray.  And they can eat candy.

In Japan, there is one kind of festival, it’s 753 festival.  On 753 Festival, the seven-year-old girls and five-year-old boys and three-year-old girls and boys, they will go to worship after they give money.  It’s Japanese Children’s Day.  Every child likes Children’s Day.

The 7-5-3 Festival is a Japanese convention (conventional) festival.  On 7-5-3 Festival, 3-year-old girls and boys, 5-year-old boys and 7-year-old girl go to the temple (and) pray.  Mothers and fathers give them candy.  Wish (them to live) to one thousand years old.