Younger writers:低年級寫作

我們先念過一次. 然後討論要畫什麼. 經由討論, 學生們對文章的內容都有比較清楚的概念之後, 我就請大家寫下teddy bear的藏身處. 接著就畫圖啦.

Jessica.

Weber.

Chieny.

Nini.

Sophia.

My Family

My name is Claire.  I’m nine years old.  My favorite color is purple.  My favorite clothes are pants.  It’s sunny and hot.  I’m wearing a gray T-shirt and gray pants.

This is my sister.  She is tall and pretty.  Her favorite color is black.  Her favorite clothes are pants.  It’s rainy and cold.  She is wearing a purple sweater and green pants.

This is my father.  He is tall and handsome.  His favorite color is blue.  His favorite clothes are pants.  It’s snowy and cold.  He is wearing a red sweater and black pants.

This is my mother.  She is thin and pretty.  Her favorite color is red.  her favorite clothes are pants.  It’s cloudy and cold.  She is wearing a pink sweater and blue pants.

My Family

My name is Patty.  I’m nine years old.  My favorite color is orange.  My favorite clothes are T-shirts and pants.  It’s sunny and hot.  I’m wearing a yellow T-shirt and black pants.

This is my brother.  He is handsome and tall.  His favorite color is white.  His favorite clothes are T-shirts and pants.  It’s cloudy and hot.  He is wearing blue pants and a yellow T-shirt.

This is my father.  He is handsome and tall.  His favorite color is yellow.  His favorie clothes are T-shirts and pants.  It’s windy and hot.  He is wearing gray pants and yellowT-shirt.

This is my mothr.  She is tall and thin.  Her favorite color is black.  Her favorite clothes are sweaters and black pants.  It’s snowy and cold.  She is wearing black pants and pink sweater.

My Family

My name is Dave.  I’m ten years old.  My favorite color is yellow.  My favorite clothes are jackets.  It’s sunny and hot.  I’m wearing black pants and gray shirt.

This is my grandfathr.  He is short and thin.  His favorite color is black.  His favorite clothes are shorts.  It’s rainy and cold.  He is wearing blue jacket and black pants.

This is my father.  He is tall and thin.  His favorit color is white.  His favorite clothes are shirts.  It’s windy and cold.  He is wearing brown jacket and black pants.

This is my mother.  She is short and pretty.  Her favorite color is brown.  Her favorite clothes are T-shirts.  It’s cloudy and cold.  She is wearing purple T-shirt and blue pants.

My Family

My name is Vivian.  I’m nine years old.  My favorite color is pink.  My favorite clothes are T-shirts.  It’s sunny and hot.  I’m wearing a pink T-shirt and brown pants.

This is my mother.  She is short and pretty.  Her favorite color is black.  Her favorite clothes are pants.  It’s sunny and hot.  She is wearing a black sweater and blue pants.

This is my father.  He is tall and handsome.  His favorite color is red.  His favorite clothes are blue pants.  It’s sunny and hot.  He is wearing a white T-shirt and blue pants.

This is my brother.  He is tall and handsome.  His favorite color is blue.  His favorite clothes are blue shirts.  It’s sunny and hot.  He is wearing a blue T-shirt and brown pants.